I am Getting Into you [Poem]

Vicki by 3... just because people don't comment, does not mean that everyone dislikes it. *smiles and hugs*

Part of writing is the disappointment of getting simple critical feedback, another is getting positive feedback from a source that can't be honest, and yet one other is getting no feedback at all. All three are equally frustrating.

Your poem...

That said, I am personally having a slight bit of difficulty determining exactly what the poem is trying to convey. There are some unanswered questions like: what is it you made your mind up to do? Why did that person forgive you? Who were they? What is it you are getting yourself into? The last one you could simply hint at. Consider that even though it's a poem, you still need to fill in the story as to not leave us in complete darkness. It's a pretty feeling poem with some good thought and emotive. I think I can see where you want it to go as the ideas are there. I can already smell the blossoms of your ideas before the buds a ready to bloom! :-)

Now I know that you said on your blog that you have attention deficit disorder so lets not talk about spelling. Reread your poem, have a family member or friend reread it as well, and look for misspellings. For example, look for things like "Your" vs. "You're" and "the " instead of "they"... but if you like I will correct what I think you misspelled and send that to you privately... let me know, it's up to you ok? :-)

Anyways, also, I'm wondering if you would consider the exercise of writing it anew, however from the perspective of whomever or whatever you are "getting in to"? I would love to see how that evolved.

I believe this has the makings of a lovely poem. :-) Keep working at it and pushing stuff out here for us to read. Ok? The more we all bravely rework that which we love the most, the better we become at writing.

Michelle xo.